Love it. The emotions are so real, I can almost taste them. The words linger on the tongue like well-aged brandy and this is so absolutely fucking awesome that I struggle to come up with something to say.

Another impactful piece. At first, I was like, "oh, this is alright," but then I read it aloud and the way the words flow is like music.

My absolute favorite line is:

I don'tcaredon'tlistendon'tgiveashit what they say/

Because I know you're already gonebeyondfaraway.

Wow, that bit just gave me goosebumps.

This is great because you really give us a feel for the person who is gone without really going into detail. I feel like I know this person, and I'm mourning them.

I also liked the yellow dress thing. When you say: "That you askedpersuadedconvinced me/ Never to wearputondressin black at your funeral" makes me think that the person knew they were going to die.

But I don't know, there's so many ways this can be interpreted.

Haunting.