Reviews for The Sacrifice
Zaffre Magpie chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
This was good. Shouldn't 'heed' have been in bold though? That's the only thing I see. Keep up the good work!
Reel Wander chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
That made me smile

I found it cute
EvilEmoElmoKillsSanta chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
This is a really good poem/story.
Maggie Johnson chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
I love wordplay! Nice work, but did you intend to bold the word "heed" in the second to last line? (That's the only thing I can possibly critique here.) :)