Reviews for Goodbye Until Tomorrow |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! This story was so much fun to read! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! And your first 2 stories as well :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww! That Epilogue was a well-deserved fluffy end to Sarah and Dietrich's story. So. I admit I didn't like Sarah in the first story but in this, she totally redeemed herself. That's the mark of a really good writer so congratulations :) and Dietrich and Jonah love love love! *squeals like a fangirl* Ri :) |
![]() ![]() I am not sure if I have ever reviewed any of your stories, but I know I have read them many, many times. To Feel the Sun is my favorite of the trilogy, by many leaps and bounds though. I like the way you write, but at the same time I don't. I love your writing on my good days, or even mediocre ones-it makes me feel happy in a sort of bubbly way, more lasting than any one joyous event. I despise it sometimes for its lack of depth, because there are just so many levels that are touched, so many things left vague (and not deliberately so), and even though there is a fair amount of self-reflection, it never seems to go anywhere until a major epiphany. I guess to summarize, your writing is, to me, not at all realistic, and that is why I, a romantic at heart, but a pragmatist in real life, like it. You follow all the steps-beginning, building tension, climax, conclusion, but sometimes, on my more bitter days, that's all it is... going through the motions of an unrealistic romance. On to a different note, I love To Feel the Sun, and I was really hesitant about this one. I didn't care about Sarah much as a character-not because she was a bitch, but because she really didn't have much substance to me (and I'll admit, I'm quite a bitch myself at times). I realize, to some degree, that this fic was an attempt to flesh her out, but she still felt kind of empty to me. Your characterization of her (carrying from To Feel the Sun) was great, and I appreciate and respect the dignity you brought to her character, but somehow it just wasn't enough for me. Her chemistry with Dietrich just felt awkward and disjointed, and I didn't quite know how to feel. Perhaps there was just too much plot mingled with the self-reflection, and so the latter's significance became muted. Who knows. Regardless, I respect your writing, and success in creating characters that embodied a lot of our own flaws and fears, even if the situations they were in were somewhat far-fetched. Your writing may not enough to change a bad day into a good one for me, but it's enough to make me hope a little harder when the monotony of life gets to me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love Jonah and Gracie and wouldnt oppose to another story about them. this story is so lovely. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've missed your writing so much! And i am SO glad i found my way back to this story. You're a wonderful writier and i think this is one of your best works. It made me think alot. And as much as i LOVED the first two, this one i can relate with. i loved how sarah came to terms with who she is and what she wants, it's inspiring, really. I also bawled when gracie sang to cillian. It was beautiful and heartbreaking. I truly think you're one hell of a writer. No matter what, your stories make this world a better place :) that probably sounds cheesy, but as a faithful reader, i can safely say that it's true. xoxo, take care and never stop writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I really enjoyed reading all of your three stories, and following the previous characters through the next one. They were very well written and, well, just totally great! I know I left you reviews of the other two as well, but I wanted to let you know again how much I liked them, because they, as a group, are probably among the top 5 stories I have read, in quality and interest, and I have read PLENTY of stories. Thank you so much for sharing your talents! |
![]() ![]() OH my good ness. I was totally blown away by this story. Very well written, Just the right amount of angst and I loved that besides the language it was a true rated T fic. Thank you so much. I really enjoyed reading this. There can be good fiction without the needless sex. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great! Looking forward to reading on! Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful. No one can have enough Gracie or Jonah. I coached a girl named Gracie this past summer and she was the sweetest thing. It must be the name. And I would love to read more Gracie and Jonah. |
![]() ![]() I absolutely beg of you to write more Gracie and Jonah! Especially from Jonah's view :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it!. I having been following your stories for a few years, and just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy your writing. I would love to read more about Jonah and Gracie. Also I think it be neat to read about when Dietrich and Sarah have kids. I imagine how the sisters deal with their pregnancies would be so different. |
![]() ![]() OMG If you wrote another story about Gracie and Jonah, I'd totally read it! I've only been reading the sequels to To Feel the Sun for the little Gracie and Jonah moments :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really couldn't have hoped for a better ending! Eloping really does suit Dietrich and Sarah. I have to admit, I think I love them just a bit more than Gracie and Jonah. Its just something about them.. I love it. Thanks for sharing this with everyone! |
![]() ![]() oh my gosh! do not even hesitate on writing more of Gracie and Jonah! I love the characters way too much too be healthy, I reread To Feel the Sun after I saw you had completed this. You're writing is amazing and just really realistic. please continue writing! |