Weaker and American? Why doesn't he just by a handgun?

Aww. This was really good. I liked the length of it too.

Very good story. Reading it made my day :)
I would have liked to know how Matt reacts, but I like the way you write and I loved the characters. Very good job!

awww... they are so cuuuute :)... I really liked this story. Cam is just so adorable... jesus I really laught my ass of some times :)... wathever... the onla thing i didnt liked were matt and rachelle... they were kind of unlikable :(... butthe sory was amazing and i relly really liked andrew and cam ...hihihi...

I really liked this story. Most of the one or two shots I read end up like novels cut short, but this one delivered on everything it promised. There were a couple things that annoyed me – the ex and Rachelle being brought in to argue Andrew’s case was not very interesting, and somehow I thought that Matt would matter more to the story overall. But ultimately, you sketched two very believable characters, their interesting relationship, and had it develop to an emotionally satisfying point, in just two chapters. I don’t feel like I missed out on anything here, like there was some other thing you should have put it; it’s got a feeling of completeness to it.
So now I’m going to go check out your profile and hope you’ve written other slash things.

Loved it so much! It is hard to find stories about gay guys that aren't overly, well, gay... err that sounded better in my head. What I am trying to say is that I love how you kept the characters very guy-ish. Being stubborn, snarky, teasing, swearing, and not talkatively emotional but hard core with their actions. I am a sucker for the 'just shut fuck up and let me snog your brains out' moments. Nice read, thanks for sharing

Haha, I liked it(: Thanks for writing!

I loved this! The writing style was awesome, and I laughed quite a few times, especially when Cam realizes the whole staff heard Andrew telling him to stop checking him out :D Also, loved the graphic bit at the end ;) Sequel please?

Ha, they're finally together! That sex scene is hot XD I'm still wondering what Andrew wanted to say to Matt before Cam dragged him to his room, but what the hell. Matt can go fk himself XD I'm with Cam, Matt totally not my favorite. hehee.

You should write more m/m story like this. I'll definitely read it!

Cam is so wonderfully snarky that it just warms the cockles of my little heart - definitely one of the best main characters I've read in a while! His attitude really made me laugh, as did Andrew's stubborn-bastard side. They're really quite the adorable pair of idiots, and the writing style rocks for this form of narrative. Kudos on a great job!

If you are indeed, "going in an entirely new direction, but the imagination creates what it creates, eh?" it is a direction you should continue. As others have asked, any chance of a sequel?

aw what cuties :3 hehe

*snuggle snuggle* xD

i had to stop at the part where he was caught checking andrew out since i was laughing so hard. dude this story is amazing XD

love the work and im off to reading chapter 2~

I'm so sorry about Cam's multimedia projects!

But glad he's with Andrew, now.

Hello! I try and comment on everything I make it all the way through, and lookie, you win! *laughs* I realize that sounds funny, but I guess what I'm trying to say in a round-about way is that your story kept me reading through to the end, which these days is difficult with me. XD I like Andrew a lot and the fact that Cameron couldn't read him. There were some things I might usually point out, but I don't recall a 'looking for crits' so I'll keep them to myself. Goodness, I've said a lot of 'nothing' haven't I? XD Sorry. Anyway... cheers!