|Reviews for Mallicki|
| Raebie chapter 6 . 1/24/2011
It would almost be irritating, falling for so long only to land and be assaulted by nothing. Great chapter!
| MentalBrink chapter 5 . 1/21/2011
I love your version of hell, the condemned sound freakin' wicked bro!
| Raebie chapter 5 . 1/21/2011
Sounds like he isn't in very good shape. But still going after Michelle... awesome.
| Raebie chapter 4 . 1/21/2011
Yup, meditating has never led anyone wrong yet!
Now watch, I just cursed it, didn't I? I certainly hope not, so you better update soon so I know!
| MentalBrink chapter 3 . 1/8/2011
Nice, I really like how you incorporate elementals into this.
It's just my opinion, but maybe the story should slow up just a tad and express the situations with the nOrmal people's reactions and stuff. It's not necessary though :P
Keep writing !
| Raebie chapter 3 . 1/7/2011
Another good chapter. There are a few minor grammar things that could be changed, but not bad.
~I came here to find her, now where the hell is Hell?~ I love this line! So funny!
Keep up the good work!
| Raebie chapter 2 . 1/4/2011
Stabbed once in the heart and twice in the lungs? Ouch!
Great chapter, can't wait for more!
| Raebie chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
This sounds very intriguing. I'm very interested in seeing where it goes, so I hope you plan on updating soon.
| MentalBrink chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Nice, a sckitzo-Mage lol, can't wait to see where you take it.
| Isadora Wayland chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Sounds dramatic and exciting. Just from this summary, I kind of love it . It's very dark but in a good way if you understand what I mean...?
You have a neat style. Go for it.