Reviews for The Last Act
Archia chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
I loved this, it was just so enjoyable to read. The way the clown's sadness was described was almost in a way like it was understated, but that made it so powerful. Great story.
dail-of-the-air chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Very lyrical, great imagery. With the short paragraphs (this might be fp's wacky formatting) it seems much better under "Poetry". I enjoyed the contrast between the supposedly jolly jester and the stereotypically emo black costume. Do these symbols represent an inner dichotomy?

Good job!
moongazer7 chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
why is this poem in the essay category?