Reviews for Ending With Goodbye
seventh.movement chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
i see how this one seems rather real and personal.

i like how your emotions bring out even deeper truths about you.

very vivid imagination, i like the natural phenomena you've put in.

anyway, i'd like to see you use stronger and not so straightforward words to let your readers use their own imagination.

but overall, good poem! keep it up, man!