Even though Blair is getting on my nerves after every word you write, I really like the story. I love the fact that all of the "Council" including her half brother kept him and effectively saying that yes she is their friend but she really doesn't hold any power whatsoever. Love it. Hope you come back to finish!

I like Liam better.

Interesting concept. I really look forward to seeing where this goes.

Right now my favorite character is Warren, though Liam is kind of high up there. I'm reserving judgement on everyone else once I see their role in this whole thing. I don't mind Blair, she is just easier to overlook as a drama queen. Love to see her character explored some, for how she got the way she is and to see if anything changes. Make sure they seem more than skin deep or shallow, make sure actions are justified. Make sure her change is gradual, not like someone flipped a switch. Same goes for the rest of the characters, like interactions between them all. So far you are doing a good job working things in, I just don't want you to lose that as the plot moves on.

As this is a romance...I'm thinking between Blair and Warren, it should be an interesting trip as the plot keeps progressing. Same goes for how Blair can capitalize on her text message, I'm sure she has the pull to make it not such an empty set up a lot of good dynamics...Warren and Blair, then Warren and the crew, then Warren and Liam...all are essential to Blair's popularity so him being in that circle puts him in a good place and makes his appearance it the plot justified. If that makes sense. Basically, he isn't just some random new kid that shows up, she falls in love with, bam the end. There is more to it than that. Love it.

You have great pacing for this story. It doesn't go to fast or too slow. I feel like you give the reader time to digest what is going on, without lingering on certain events that might get the reader annoyed with the plot. Keep it coming.

I like your dialogue,we get a sense of your characters through it and how others respond. You have great tags that add to the description. And the whole thing seems rather realistic.

That said, maybe describe the setting a little more. Round it out a bit. So the story doesn't just focus on the kids, maybe insert a scene with a teacher (they are at school after all) or a family thing (you did a good job with the parents and principal). I know it is a private school...but do they go home? If so expand on their home lives...it might reveal more about the characters. And if the whole class was there, and maybe a teacher...how did Knox get away with having a cigarette out? I love the image, but is it realistic? Or are teachers clueless...Just a little thing to watch for.

The whole shoulders slumping Blair...I didn't think she would give up so easy. Though sometimes things aren't as they seem, I'm sure. Love to see her test that thing and see how her crew adopting Warren will go. Can't wait to see what happens next.

I LOVE it! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Warren is my favorite guy from your stories and I've now read all of your stories! Please update soon! This is a great story! Lots of drama! Excitement! Keep up the awesomeness! :)

Wow, this was extremely well-written! I'm loving the private school setting to this too :P

And I'm kind of with Eve on the whole be-nicer-to-people thing and stop-being-so-rude-to-people. I thought it was pretty shallow of Blair to treat the guys - i.e., pat them on their head like he's a dog although it was pretty amusing - the way she did! I hope she changes, though. But… I guess that's what Warren's here for :) (Hopefully.)

I think Blair is one of those characters you grow to love to hate. :) I forgot to mention in my previous review, but great dialogue. You make every line count and they tell oodles about your characters. You also have a knack for revealing setting and transitions, kind of like a movie scene, not too much or too little detail. The plot thickens. Can't wait to see where you take this.

I really like this. I hope it is as nice and escape and break from your other stories as it is from life when I read it. I hope that makes some semblence of sense. Haha. It's been a long day so I'm not sure how much sense I'm making. Anyways, this does have a Gossip Girl vibe (names and private school I'm sure), but I think that helps set the mood. You have great characterization of your cast so far and leave enough intrigue to get your readers to want to know more. At least to me. I'm off to read the next chapter. :)

I think i could get into this. Sometimes the bitches just piss me off so much that I can't get into it. However, with some of Warren's POV i think I could enjoy this, especially since its well written

From what I've read so far, I'm looking forward to this! If there's one hope that I have, looking into the future, it's that this story's plotline is spaced out a little more realistically than the Peanut series, in which a lot of the happenings seem to be kind of smushed together.