Reviews for Golden Siblings
BookcraZzaY chapter 58 . 10/9/2011
I don't know what would happen if you could leave your body. I guess it'd either be cool or weird seeing everyone and they can't see you or something. greet haukiu...is there a line missing though? love it :D
BookcraZzaY chapter 57 . 10/9/2011
love the methaphour...Its an amazing poem. It reminds me of something but it...but it also makes me think that in a way no ones sane lolz :)
mythomagic chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
these are really great. you're an amazing poet! :D

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BookcraZzaY chapter 56 . 7/22/2011
Wow this one the gun part and the uh

If poetry shock exists I'm gojing into one

I understand the first part now :) and it's so dark and deep

This is defiantly true poetry down to the core every word is just so deep and has it's own edge to it

Fantastical job _&
BookcraZzaY chapter 55 . 7/22/2011
Interesting poem :D I don't completely understand it but it's really deep and well written
BookcraZzaY chapter 54 . 7/16/2011
It kind of reminds me of breaking away from the childhood you had ...greet job. it was an interesting idea to combine small haiku's to write this :D
BookcraZzaY chapter 53 . 7/16/2011
I kind of reminds me of peeling a banana Its a greet metaphor for admitting that you're wrong. Sometimes it's the hardest thing to do
hanging on ariadne's thread chapter 15 . 7/13/2011
this is lovely. though it was the title that drew me to this poem.

a reminder to why i love haiku's. keep writing them. :)
BookcraZzaY chapter 52 . 7/13/2011
Theyre all just amazing and powerful And if I had to chose a fave id fave all of them :-)
BookcraZzaY chapter 51 . 7/10/2011
So I'm giving the title on the first one an A haha I love them both...and the comedic part 2...well there both my Fave poems of the day
BookcraZzaY chapter 50 . 6/30/2011
Haha I ate all ur dreams LOVE THIS! It's amazing :*D
BookcraZzaY chapter 49 . 6/22/2011
The Allllll

Mind glowingly epicly amazingy and DEEP and (: ur best chapter EVER
BookcraZzaY chapter 48 . 6/22/2011
It's twisted it's starts off with the impression of strength and powerfulness then goes to a weak state u should more powerful than the gods :D ur writing is

But the title...I kept terracing that haha I'm gonna go look up what it means now , I just have that fealing I'm missing something

But I can't put my finger on it
BookcraZzaY chapter 47 . 6/22/2011
Haha

LSD alert JK JK

But Its...(: original and (: happy times (:
BookcraZzaY chapter 46 . 6/22/2011
Verry clever poem

I no it's dark but I just want to keep reading it over

It's clever and dark and I love it :D amazing awesome job
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