Reviews for Forfeit
ConverseAllStar chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Oh, I really wish I could hear it... but I think I got the idea. The lyrics make sense( I feel as if I should add an emoticon, but I don't know which kind to use...:P?)
Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
I don't understand music talk much but the way that this was playing in my head was a mix of linkin park and evanescence. (hope I held no offence on that one) And these lyrics are amazing. )
EternalDarkAngel chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
I like this! Although my attempt to sing it did not go well :(

But either way this is really good.
UNDERLANDERfromtheOVERLAND chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
O_O this isn't slightly disturbing at all... please tell me this is't a real experience you had...
Babiidoll chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Hell yeah, sounds amazing Id love to hear the finished product
LongToBeLikeYou chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
Heh, I liked it :D

Normally i don't like sonqs.. but i liked the lyrics and i can picture the voices with the lyrics. If you ever record a CD, i'd buy it.
Raebie chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
I love it!

I'm always drawn to dark or sad stuff, so I really like this one. The guitar tabs mean nothing to me, seeing as I have no idea how to play a guitar or read the notes, but I really like the lyrics.

Great work!