I LOVE IIIIIT!
I love one shots with cute plots! Waaahhh
I hope you write more one shots like this!

AAAAh, I love this one-shot! It's just so real and down to earth.

Did she marry Connor ? I feel like she might've , but the ending confused me ..

I liked that the story was nicely written. I didn't really like that the plot was slightly dry and boring but it's a decent long one-shot overall.

Awww! Cute! I like how you went through her whole life instead of just when Connor came in to play. I'm glad it was Connor she married, though it wasn't blatantly obvious.

Thanks for sharing this; I actually really liked it. There were some grammar errors, but nothing that couldn't be fixed with a little more editing, and certainly nothing that detracted much from the story itself.
I didn't understand at first what you meant by "modernizing romance," but I think I began to understand about halfway through. I'm surprised I didn't grow bored, to be honest, but apparently the gentle lull of everyday life draws me in just as much as action and drama in more typical storylines. It's curious that way, because it actually makes it easier (for me, at least) to read. I have a deplorable lack of self control, and when it cracks, I'll end up skimming to find the "climax" to whichever event a story is currently describing. This gentle easiness didn't yank me that way, but it also didn't let go of my attention. Anyway, it was soothing and sweet, but not toothachingly sweet, and a cool take on "modernized romance." :)

oh my god u know its just not crush u see...as in ...dey r together through long distance relation nd d way he said d truth just damn evrything is just perfect,..man TRUE LOVE in other words ;) love it :)

ohmygod ! this story is awesome ! It's like a timeline or something and I did cry when Lyla said :

"It's funny how time tends to pass you by. One day you're playing in the sandbox and the next day you're getting your high school diploma"

Thumbs up and thanks for sharing this great story :D

Awwwwww, it's adorable! good job!

hwee~ i totally loved it. :) it seems so realistic, to me at least - her past, their feelings, etc. i read this quite some time ago but suddenly decided to review~ :D JIAYOUS! XD

You should give breaks occasionally. The scene changes are getting confusing.

I liked it. There wasn't much romance in it, but it was sensible and real. It was good and I like your style, the way you took your time. But if you went a little slower, it'd be as slow as snailtoise. Yeah.

Still: good work!

Thanks for the read!

Ohmygod that was adorbz. Connor is a total cutie.

This one-shot was really cute and very realistic-so true to life. It's seldom you find a story that isn't overly cliche and realistic. Good job! :)

This is a great story! I liked how you started with her background crushes and then told her story with Connor. It's so cute and I loved the fact that her first crush was Draco Malfoy.

This is so beautiful. Just plain beautiful. :) Amazing.

I nearly got a wee-bit teary towards the end. :)

Thank you. For this.