Reviews for Special Olympics
killMeN0w chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
I'm not actually done reviewing and reading your work...:P Prepare for more!

This was so AWESOME! It reminded me of a famous story, about a physically incapable peoples' group being in a race. One person tripped and fell over, and instead of continuing, everyone turned back and picked the person and they all crossed the finish line together...

This haiku is SOOOO exactly a summary of the story. And even keeping that aside, it's so very true, the haiku. Perfect. I can't even begin to explain how beautiful I thought this was.
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
This makes me want to cry. Stunning, sir.
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Aw sweet :D
sophiesix chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
I love how you split everyone to emphasise the one. THis was really lovely, it really evoked the spirit of the special Olympics for me!
this wild abyss chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
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I loved the alliteration here because it gave this haiku a more poetic feel than most of its genre usually attain. However, I didn't like how you made 'every one' in the first line appear as two separate words because the more correct way is just one word, 'everyone'.
William G. Thorne chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
a very sentimental haiku. it flows very well.

-William
nickyO chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Touching and true. :)
byakuya kuchiki chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
I like it
SirScott chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
Nice poem.

SirScott
Raebie chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
Very sweet. Well done!