Reviews for the boy in the air
vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
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That last stanza was PERFECT. I love the poem as a whole, loved the imagery and the idea and the flow and everything, but that last stanza, especially the last line, just...hits, you know? Hits in the chest. This is gorgeous. :)
Renana chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Hey! This is really brilliant, I can just imagine a carefree boy who's naive and spontaneous but vulnerable at times too. And I love the last line, it has depth. Nice rhythm and imagery :) Awesome poem!

Renana
brosandi chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
The last line is brilliant. I love this. The imagery and line breaks are wonderful. It flows so well.