Reviews for Bob Seger Saves the Day
NyghtWriter12 chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
this was a very enjoyable love story. It's a very well written story.
Preposterous chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Awww! This story is as cute as a teeny puppy sitting on a cloud of cotton candy.
Kina Kalamari chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Ha. That was pretty entertaining. I love putting on loud music and dancing around when there's no one else in the house. P

Nice job. )
funnechick chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
I always love college-centered stories since there aren't many out there, and this one is no exception. Great job! :) Looking forward to more of your one-shots in the future.
LSnyd chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Unfortunately I am one of those horrible readers that very rarely take the time to leave a review. However, I felt that you should know how much I enjoyed your story. I love how it is set in college, versus the everyday high school stories that seem be everywhere on here. In the short amount of words I was able to connect to your characters and am interested in knowing the rest of their story. I hope that you will maybe make a second part to this one-shot or somehow keep these characters alive. Well done.
checkyesdana chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
I loved this! it was so fun and adroable
charmedblush chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Oh my goodness! that was so cool! You put in so many of my favourites as allusions! Maybe you didn't mean to, but do you watch AVPM any chance? Super mega foxy awesome hot? And Being Nikki? Have you read the book? Anyway that was cool
aslan17 chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
YES! I'm assuming you watched a very potter musical cause you used "super mega foxy awesome hot" So good!
chibiwriter chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
Cute! chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
So, your Very Potter Musical reference made me extremely happy.

And the whole Risky business deal. That was epic as well. Just thought I'd let you know.
Ribena chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
:) This made me smile :)

I like the softness of the characters, it makes this story dream-like. Awesome job!
MazeRunner chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
This was so cute ad well written. I really loved the part where they were in the kitchen and she was talking to herself. It showed she was slightly wierd. Anyway, great story:)

Ngoc1231 chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
When I read this, it kinda felt like something that it was part of another story. Maybe it was the way you introduced everyone? But then again, I'm running on such little sleep, maybe it is just me.

I did like their little tension in the kitchen, and it was funny that she was wearing his shirt. I totally imagined though at the end that her brother would make an actual appearance, but it worked the way you ended it.

Love the story!

nicolerools chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
I really liked it and hope you'll continue and make this into a full story. Hopefully her and her brother make up, and its somewhat of an unfufilling ending because of how she still has problems with her brother. Unless you at one point said something like they do get along, or its better when they dont get along.

Great job, love the beginning, its jsut the ending that left it missing something

- nicolerools (too lazy to log in)
swamp13 chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
i lovee itt (: please write more to it (:
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