Reviews for Bob Seger Saves the Day |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this was a very enjoyable love story. It's a very well written story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww! This story is as cute as a teeny puppy sitting on a cloud of cotton candy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha. That was pretty entertaining. I love putting on loud music and dancing around when there's no one else in the house. P Nice job. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always love college-centered stories since there aren't many out there, and this one is no exception. Great job! :) Looking forward to more of your one-shots in the future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Unfortunately I am one of those horrible readers that very rarely take the time to leave a review. However, I felt that you should know how much I enjoyed your story. I love how it is set in college, versus the everyday high school stories that seem be everywhere on here. In the short amount of words I was able to connect to your characters and am interested in knowing the rest of their story. I hope that you will maybe make a second part to this one-shot or somehow keep these characters alive. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this! it was so fun and adroable |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness! that was so cool! You put in so many of my favourites as allusions! Maybe you didn't mean to, but do you watch AVPM any chance? Super mega foxy awesome hot? And Being Nikki? Have you read the book? Anyway that was cool |
![]() ![]() YES! I'm assuming you watched a very potter musical cause you used "super mega foxy awesome hot" So good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, your Very Potter Musical reference made me extremely happy. And the whole Risky business deal. That was epic as well. Just thought I'd let you know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) This made me smile :) I like the softness of the characters, it makes this story dream-like. Awesome job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so cute ad well written. I really loved the part where they were in the kitchen and she was talking to herself. It showed she was slightly wierd. Anyway, great story:) OnlyIfIWereStronger |
![]() ![]() ![]() When I read this, it kinda felt like something that it was part of another story. Maybe it was the way you introduced everyone? But then again, I'm running on such little sleep, maybe it is just me. I did like their little tension in the kitchen, and it was funny that she was wearing his shirt. I totally imagined though at the end that her brother would make an actual appearance, but it worked the way you ended it. Love the story! ~*~Ngoc1231~*~ |
![]() ![]() I really liked it and hope you'll continue and make this into a full story. Hopefully her and her brother make up, and its somewhat of an unfufilling ending because of how she still has problems with her brother. Unless you at one point said something like they do get along, or its better when they dont get along. Great job, love the beginning, its jsut the ending that left it missing something - nicolerools (too lazy to log in) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i lovee itt (: please write more to it (: |