|Reviews for Wave That Flag Ever So High|
| Whirlymerle chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
The poem started out excellent. It had an upbeat rhythm, and I loved your repetition. So great job on that part!
I was a little disappointed by the end though, when it no longer rhymed. You don't have to have every line rhyme, but the ending would be much more effective if the last two lines did.
Just a suggestion. Good job!
| JenniferHelena chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
I love that you created this poem by something you saw during your day that often goes unrecognized and payed no attention to. It's a great skill to have. I like this, very patriotic as well :)