Reviews for POP
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
I loved the description of popcorn. It was great how you did that without even calling it popcorn and it was a really good image in my head too.

I also like how you integrated the body parts towards the beginning and the end. It kind of connected the piece in an odd sort of way.

I also liked the selfish selflessness. It was a great oxymoron that made sense.

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amavian chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
this block style is interesting from you. really liked moribund.