Reviews for She missed it
joylouise chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Liked the way you bring the reader in to feel like one is there experiencing the same environment.
Writerandreader chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
I like this story. Wish u'd make his a story...
JennHelenaLoves chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
I like how you use the girl's other senses to describe what's going on. Great detail with this. It's easy to read- the type of thing someone could read for a long time without getting bored with it. Also, it felt calming while I was reading it. Good job with this! :)
To-Be-Remembered chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
Dang bro that is aawweessoommee! its amazing how you stuffed all that detail and intrigue and metaphors and similes and all the good stuff. I mean i know it's short but still a wonderful perspective. I mean dang bro! amazing!