Reviews for She missed it |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Liked the way you bring the reader in to feel like one is there experiencing the same environment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story. Wish u'd make his a story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how you use the girl's other senses to describe what's going on. Great detail with this. It's easy to read- the type of thing someone could read for a long time without getting bored with it. Also, it felt calming while I was reading it. Good job with this! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dang bro that is aawweessoommee! its amazing how you stuffed all that detail and intrigue and metaphors and similes and all the good stuff. I mean i know it's short but still a wonderful perspective. I mean dang bro! amazing! -EscapeTheChair |