|Reviews for Disappearing|
| Domina chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
This is really good, it kept me guessing until the end, then I had to re- read it with the ending in mind. Well done :)
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
I love the ending of this! The whole time, I was assuming that it was a friend, significant other, or family member talking about another person. It never even crossed my mind that it was self-reflection.
[All these things I know about her
They can't disappear
But she's been disappearing] Interesting phrasing, especially talking about her traits disappearing. I usually think of the image as hiding, so I like how you take it to the next level of actually wanting to erase parts of yourself.
A few typos:
[There's no where left to run,
No where left to hide] no where nowhere
[She can't out run it this time] out run outrun
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