Reviews for living the life
VioletColes chapter 25 . 8/9/2013
Amazing story so sad it ended though. Now i have to go find me a Zack than make him date me than break up with so he can marry me and be my husband instead of my boyfriend. But before i did any of that i thought i should write a review telling what an amazing author you are and i hope you continue writing stories
Uncle Rupert chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
I have got to be honest with you, i am not liking this at all. I feel absolutely horrible typing this but i am going to anyway. Your main character Tee is a terrible person. She is whine and in your face and not in a good way. She sounds like a snobby stuck up brat. I am not sure if that’s what you were going for but that’s what I am reading. I have you say when I got to the part about her outfit I gaped. I have to say it made me mad. If she wanted to be a hippie (which you spelt hippy?) why would you put her in a generic top that is most probably made in some third world country by six year olds for peanuts. Only celebrities are pulling out that shit and dubbing it a trend. I consider myself somewhat of a hippie - not in the sense of drugs and such but in the awareness of standing up for what you believe is right. People matter more then brands and labels. In all my years and odd outfits (Doesn‘t matter what you are, pick your damn tag and take it to the extreme) I have never have people yell at me that I am a freak, maybe a puzzled stare but nothing more. This is all a little to catty for me but the stereo-typing is insulting to the point its just down right childish. The point is without a likeable lead character there is no need for me to want to continue. Just something for you to think about. Tee’s vanity is ugly not an outfit. Just think it over.i dont mean to be hurtful but honesty is the best . sorry.
KryshaJanwood chapter 25 . 6/1/2011
Awesome story! Love it, the plot and everything! But it's a bit fast-paced and it will be better if you have been able to edit and proofread it, especially the punctuation marks. Yeah...but basically, I think you're really good. ;)
fullybooked chapter 25 . 4/30/2011
I really loved this story!

Hope you get to edit it though.
PandaBeaarAmy chapter 24 . 4/27/2011
awesome but it went way too fast...
bonnie1md chapter 24 . 4/27/2011
I love this story. i just love tee and zack. you should read my story it has a guy named zack in it.
PureLifeDLV chapter 24 . 4/27/2011
Nice and cute chapter. Surprisingly I like it. It was pretty fast, but nice. Oh and I'm excited to read your next story. :D
bonnie1md chapter 23 . 4/26/2011
i so want her to go out with zack. jace is ok but zack is way better.
PureLifeDLV chapter 23 . 4/26/2011
Well than maybe Tee will go back to the states :P. Sorry I just popped that out, but I really want the two (Zack and Tee) to get back together. But anyway it was a cute chapter.

Just a little correction. At the end when they arrived to the airport you mixed up the names. It should be Jace and you wrote Zack.

Is the fight soon going to start? Oh and I hope it won't be long or anything like that.

Please Update soon. I'm really excited to know what'll happen next. :D
AMZIEXXX chapter 22 . 4/25/2011
I can't wait for the next chapters.

I love your story.

Update soon.


bonnie1md chapter 22 . 4/24/2011
I like really like this story. You are really good.
PureLifeDLV chapter 22 . 4/24/2011
:P you are welcome.

Aw I think I'm getting very attached to Jace now. I'm waiting for Zack to burst in England and be in the same school as they are. Brothers fighting for the girl, it will be awesome. So now you got me real excited for what's coming next.

And the flight attendant is so vain. :o

But anyway, Update SON :D
PureLifeDLV chapter 20 . 4/18/2011
Jace is getting really infatuated by Tee and it's only been a few hours he knows her. Sheesh the guy moves fast. Oh Zack you really just should discover what is happening in you back. And about the next chapter you wrote. Is Zack going to join Tee and Jace in England. I hope so, that would be very dramatic ;)
PureLifeDLV chapter 21 . 4/18/2011
Tee is pretty funny with her heart going dug dug dug. She was just confused about Zack and when she sees Jace she instantly forgets. :P Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think that Tee is attracted to Jace just because of the resemblance to his younger sibling. Truly awesome cliché. Update soon. :D
fullybooked chapter 19 . 4/11/2011
HAhaha! When I saw the title of the chapter i thought it would be something like Romeo and Juliet's Balcony Scene!
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