|Reviews for Black Sand|
| Arrowhead1996 chapter 18 . 12/30/2013
I still don't think that was a good idea, Nakia. Letting him do anything to you is a bad idea.
Next soon, please!
| lmamc chapter 18 . 1/27/2013
Great chapter. Verry happy that Anubis is safe. Up date soon please.
| MeLoveCookies chapter 17 . 1/22/2013
Please hurry and update!
This story is amazing.
I love it
Please just update
It cant be done yet
| Any59.0 chapter 17 . 1/5/2013
I like how you played Set.
| Jenna chapter 17 . 12/27/2012
Oooohhh, I can't WAIT for the next chapter, hope it's soon! There many Anubis stories out there, and this is one of three good ones I've found.
| lmamc chapter 17 . 12/5/2012
This chapter is great! I love how you write your story. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Up date soon.
| Any59.0 chapter 16 . 11/16/2012
I like Nakia, Anubis, and Paws (of course). I have a...respect...for Amun, even if I think he's a perverted jerk. I also enjoy Thoth.
| Tezzah chapter 16 . 10/22/2012
Great chapter and it was sooo exciting, especially the end! I don't have a favorite character, 'cause I like them all! Please please please updater soon :D
| lmamc chapter 16 . 9/3/2012
Great chapter! My favorite chapter is Nakia, of course. That's because I feel that I would be the same as she if I was put into her situation.
Up date soon.
| lmamc chapter 15 . 8/9/2012
Great chapter, Malinda is just being put through the ringer. Anubis had better appreciate what she is doing for him. Up date soon please.
| SkyLyte chapter 4 . 7/15/2012
Sweet story! The action is picking up now. I really like this story. You're the first person I know of to write about Egyptian Mythology. So, I could call it an honour to read your story.
| SkyLyte chapter 2 . 7/15/2012
THIS STORY ROCKS!
I LOVE YOUR DESCRIPTION. I COULDN'T WAIT TO FINISH READ THE CHAPTER, I JUST HAD TO COMMENT.
| anangeltakesthedevilshand chapter 14 . 5/6/2012
This is an amazing story. Nice format and everything. I'm keeping this in my sight! It's great.
| Any59.0 chapter 9 . 5/6/2012
Helpful criticism time! What ever happened to Nakia speaking all languages known to man? You have accidentally lost some details (though I can't remember which ones) so try to keep them going.
Other than that, I love the story!
| MorningStar1740 chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Can I write a review if I'm gonna keep reading anyway, I'm not really a critic but I'll try for now, When people write they usually try to make an image in the readers mind and to do that they describe all of the Senses, when you started writing you made a picture in my mind but there was no sound, no taste, no feeling, no smell. You did a great job of saying what it looked like though don't et me wrong. Another thing was that you didn't describe molly fully, I know she's hyper but is that it? Or are you leaving it for us to find out the rest about her. Some of the characters even though their minor characters and you will never hear about them again should be described so that we all see what you want us to see. I like how you started the story and I don't thinly here was anything wrong about it just saying. Everyday I read through tons of these fiction press books but Im going to be reading yours beginning to end. Once again I'm just a nice guy trying to be a critic so if it didn't make any sense, sorry I'm not that great at it. And I can't wait to read more