Reviews for Black Sand
Any59.0 chapter 16 . 11/16/2012
I like Nakia, Anubis, and Paws (of course). I have a...respect...for Amun, even if I think he's a perverted jerk. I also enjoy Thoth.
Tezzah chapter 16 . 10/22/2012
Great chapter and it was sooo exciting, especially the end! I don't have a favorite character, 'cause I like them all! Please please please updater soon :D
lmamc chapter 16 . 9/3/2012
Great chapter! My favorite chapter is Nakia, of course. That's because I feel that I would be the same as she if I was put into her situation.

Up date soon.
lmamc chapter 15 . 8/9/2012
Great chapter, Malinda is just being put through the ringer. Anubis had better appreciate what she is doing for him. Up date soon please.
SkyLyte chapter 4 . 7/15/2012
Sweet story! The action is picking up now. I really like this story. You're the first person I know of to write about Egyptian Mythology. So, I could call it an honour to read your story.
SkyLyte chapter 2 . 7/15/2012
THIS STORY ROCKS!

I LOVE YOUR DESCRIPTION. I COULDN'T WAIT TO FINISH READ THE CHAPTER, I JUST HAD TO COMMENT.
anangeltakesthedevilshand chapter 14 . 5/6/2012
This is an amazing story. Nice format and everything. I'm keeping this in my sight! It's great.
Any59.0 chapter 9 . 5/6/2012
Helpful criticism time! What ever happened to Nakia speaking all languages known to man? You have accidentally lost some details (though I can't remember which ones) so try to keep them going.

Other than that, I love the story!
MorningStar1740 chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Can I write a review if I'm gonna keep reading anyway, I'm not really a critic but I'll try for now, When people write they usually try to make an image in the readers mind and to do that they describe all of the Senses, when you started writing you made a picture in my mind but there was no sound, no taste, no feeling, no smell. You did a great job of saying what it looked like though don't et me wrong. Another thing was that you didn't describe molly fully, I know she's hyper but is that it? Or are you leaving it for us to find out the rest about her. Some of the characters even though their minor characters and you will never hear about them again should be described so that we all see what you want us to see. I like how you started the story and I don't thinly here was anything wrong about it just saying. Everyday I read through tons of these fiction press books but Im going to be reading yours beginning to end. Once again I'm just a nice guy trying to be a critic so if it didn't make any sense, sorry I'm not that great at it. And I can't wait to read more
Berta433 chapter 12 . 2/1/2012
This is such a wonderful story. I really hope you update soon. The plot line is amazing, and it's never dull to read. Keep it up.
xNightDx chapter 10 . 1/15/2012
YOU'RE ALIVE!

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Hey how's it going?

Update if you can!
Mkhait chapter 10 . 8/28/2011
YOU.

I know you might be unavailable for updates, but I'm still going to say this.

UPDATE NAO. I SWEAR BY THE WRATH OF ME I WILL FORCE YOU TO IF I MUST.

Kaykay. Also, lovely story. Makes me want to finish the hundreds of mine that clutter my folders.
The Owlett Librarian chapter 2 . 7/14/2011
I must say, that by picking egyptian mythology, you picked one that I don't know so much of (yet), which leaves me rather curious... And that is a good thing, 'cause it'll keep me reading
The Owlett Librarian chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
since you were so honest in your authors note, I feel obligated to explain something. You may, or may not have noticed that i added your story to my favorites list quite some days ago. Yet I've only just started reading, this is a habit of mine. Before I leave at night, I scan through the homepage for stories I do not know yet, but do have more then 1 chapter already. After reading the summary or sometimes the first chapter, I add them to my fav list. I don't actually read them untill later, whe I'm travelling or just really need someplace else to escape to, on my mobile phone. If I finish all the existing chapters and still like it, I add it to my alert-list, and remove it from my favorites. So then you know, that if it is removed from there, that doesn't necicairily mean I quit reading it. i'd love to give you upbiulding criticism, when needed. But I can't promise you I'll be usefull.
GeniusPyromaniac chapter 10 . 7/1/2011
Love the story. I hope you update soon. Sorry to hear about your family.
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