Reviews for Trials and Tribulations of a Trainee Warlock
Fakety Mcfakename chapter 5 . 1/24/2011
finally! the two stories mesh! the writing style continues to be light, not very serious, while the characters build. It's going well, though i might have Jesse talk more, we don't know much about him.
Fakety Mcfakename chapter 3 . 1/10/2011
i love these characters! and how, finally, the setting is in a world where no one seems suprised by magic. but, i thought this was in the same world as the nightclass? and in the nightclass, their keeping the fact that it's a school of magic secret. keep it up.
Fakety Mcfakename chapter 2 . 1/10/2011
ah. the safe definition helped. at first, i was like"whoah, what goes on over there in England"? This is a great improvement, i like the character, who still hasn't been named. this is another great story.
Fakety Mcfakename chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
hmm. pretty good. you didn't draw out the main character very well yet. i like your writing style. so, draw out the chacters and the setting, and think about the narrative hook. it to soon to see what the book will be like, but it sounds good.