|Reviews for Black Fire|
| Remi chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
I dont like Ema. She got what she deserved in my opinion.
| JacobTwoTwo chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
This was amusing to read.
"Slipping in-between the bars, she slipped in", this feels very redundant, as you used the same verb two times in a single sentence.
Other than that, it was entertaining to say the least. I won't complain about character development or plot structure, as it is a very short composition, although I feel you forced the newspaper lines in it to make it connect to the month's theme.
Good job, keep it up.
| The Pretty Wallflower chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
I liked this, although I'm not a Twilight fan. I like the ending, the last sentence is good.