Reviews for Supressing Emotions |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really good I love the last line |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, it doesn't seem too much like a suicide note! Very well written, it's an acronym, right? I think that's what it's called. Anyways, good to read! :) |
![]() ![]() I like to make people happy, so I'll review this. Seriously, I think this is a highly unique suicide note. Not that I've read many suicide notes and hopefully I'll never have to write one. My favorite couplet is: "Yearning to know everything inside Pandora's lid/Searching for everything that perhaps God has hid." Some people might say "hidden" is better grammar, but I think "hid" nails down your meaning more firmly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was really good! Not only did you make each sentence start with your desired letter but you managed to make it rhyme too. If I tried that...I can't even imagine how long it'd take me. Awesome. ;) -Azrik |