Reviews for Drunk on a Street Corner
StrawberryStoleYourCookie chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
I loved the very last line...really, really good imagery.
Domina chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
breathtaking Keep it up!
Renana chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
Oh my god, I really love this. You packed so much emotion into one poem with your beautiful phrases. I especially liked "this is me, stumbling home the wrong direction" and "i only move these muscles when walls close and trains collide" Amazing work, really :)

Renana
smoke another grin chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
Dark. Pretty. Powerful.

"rain crashes and dies

amongst the broken cigarettes

only as fragile as the

paper thin lies." I liked that particularly. And the rest of it as well, actually. The confusion and the helplessness rings true.
dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
"This is me / stumbling home in the wrong direction". I think just that simple statement sums up the feeling behind every attempt to say goodbye and forget anyone or anything. You've created a simple poem rich in familiar, universal imagery. A thoroughly enjoyable read.