This is really good, I must say. I can't see why you don't have more reviews

An interesting plot, steady character development, and not moving to quickly with the emotions.

. Fabulous. I'm in love, not that I wasn't already. _ Perfect chapter. Poor Kedean, he has yet to realize that Baisyl isn't the type he thinks he is. *snickers* He'll learn. And I can't wait for more. In short, please update agin. I swear, your fic saves me from the monotany of school. I always feel like that hitying the ceiling when I see there's been an update. Keep it up, please? I'd be absolutely thrilled if you did. _

Awesome!

The sex scene certainly was sexy, yet it definitely is the characterization and emotions that make it interesting, not just the sex. Well, sex can certainly help, but it's no be-all-and-end-all. Kedean's concern for Bai's self-esteem and well-being is wonderful. 'Cause yeah, it's bad/sad when someone hates their physical form enough to risk their life, though I certainly understand Bai's reasoning.

Great chapter!

Great chapter!

You've finally updated I see...and with a rather cruel cliffhanger I might add. *bounces eagerly up and fown* Oh come on and add the next chapter sooner! I wunna read it. These two are so cute together. They're cute, PERIOD! Therefore, I MUST have the next chapter asap or I will go crazy from wsitinf. *gives you adorable, googoo puppy dog eyes* Please-please-pretty-please-with-a-cherry-on-top update?

I've been enjoying this story so much, so far. The pacing is just right- not hurried like some adventure tales tend to get but not filled with a list of every thing the characters do each day, like others. I really love the chemistry that is developing between them- they really do fit each other very well. I also like how Baisyl is developing a respect for women (as that's something rare for a slash story to get into.)

I can't believe this doesn't have more reviews, though I guess that's due to people like me that wait and lurk until they just like a story so much they *have* to review. Anyway, I can't wait for the next (M-rated, heh heh) chapter!

Awesome!

I love innuendo and this is the chapter of it. Baisyl and Kedean have such a great relationship, one that just works so well, one that is obviously love-based. Also, dancing! I dance (alright, my dancing is the moving to music without any specific style or moves, and yet still being awesome doing it.) So yeah.. this is awesome!

Great chapter!

Great story!

P.S - I updated In Interesting Times a few days ago. Hopefully, this is not redundant info and you aren't just ignoring it because of a lack of quality or anything like that. My apologies if you are reading and reviewing it right now, making this unnecessary.

I. Am. Loving. This! Aka YOU MUST UPDATE! Please-please-pretty-please-with-a-cherry-on-top? I'm begging you. You have no idea how much im loving this story. I have yo know what happens next. I have to know. I want to see their first kiss...and...other lemony goodness. I'd prefer it if you kept the M parts in the story, especially if there's gunna be important plot points in there. The only time I've posted lemons separate from the story they belong to at individual oneshots was for my Sailor Moon fanfiction series "Tomorrow, it Begins." And that was because i wanted more people to be able to read my fics without having to deal with thibgs they didn't want to or couldn't read. Plus, my lemons had no real important plot points in them. They were written solely for both my and my readers enjoyment.

...that aside...

*gives you puppy dog googoo eyes*

Update ASAP?

Amazing, absolutely amazing. You write with brilliant skill, and and you describe the...ah how shall I put this? More intimate scenes with grace and wit.

I really get a feel for Baisyl and Kedean, and what type of person they are. You also manage to create a vivid image of the area and setting and what they are doing.

Enjoying it enormously, look forward to more!

Awesome!

This chapter is hard to comment on. It's calm, really calm. The characters aren't really dealing with issues and just being together, getting to know each other. And that works well, actually. Of course, the way you write is something I always love.

I've got no worries about the M-rated stuff.

Great chapter!

Great story!

I've pretty much fallen in love with this. The dialogue, the characters' personalities, the imagery and description, the believability, the vocabulary... everything's just perfect. I'm especially fond of how you surpassed things that are common in other stories. I'm used to authors presenting the smaller characters as being childish and meek, but you've shown that size has nothing to do with personality. I could go on and on about everything else I love, but it's past due when I said I would go to bed, so I'll save it for my next review. Keep up the amazing work!

I love love love their witty banter. The sexual tension is so delicious!

Awesome!

The conversations are rather interesting, and definitely show a lot about the characters. Also, wow, both their bluntness got the romance issue out of any possibility of denial. Nice. As always, the addressing of issues connected to Baisyl's solution is fascinating and one of the main draws for me. It's sad that being female makes Baisyl feel weak and ruins arousal for him. :( Gender shouldn't do that to people, and yet it does. Your style is awesome, of course!

Alright, there are hundreds of things that make this awesome and doubt that I could list them all!

Great chapter!

Great story!

Oh... an update! Still loving the direction this seems to be going in. The UST between Baisyl and Kedean is pretty hot, you write it well imo.

WAAHH! You updated! Thank you thank you thank you! *glomps you* Aww, Basyl and Keadan are so cute together. I look forward to more. Aka, update again. Btw, i honestly agree with Meria in that "master" wasn't exactly the word Keadan preferred. _-

Aw :) Kedean. He's such a manly hero saving man/woman-in-distress. His dedication to Baisyl is so cute.