Reviews for The Beauty's Beast
Lily M.J. Fae chapter 14 . 11/20/2011
I want more... :(
Lily M.J. Fae chapter 3 . 11/20/2011
I like it so far. But can I request you go to a bad name can ruin a story. Sally, this not a horrible name, doesn't fit the story.
Clouded and Instincts chapter 13 . 8/6/2011
i absolutely love this story! best story i've read in fictionpress yet. Kudos for you!

i hope this story really does get published. for sure i'll buy it.
Lorana chapter 13 . 7/22/2011
I really enjoyed your story so far. I like the twist you gave to 'beast' had to laugh that he was called Boogie-Man. Though still felt Sally could have given him a better name to call him. Looking forward to your next chapter.
Avox chapter 13 . 7/20/2011
I am so sad you will not be posting anymore full chapters! Though this is a decent way to cut us off from The Beauty's Beast, thought I was going to cry when you said ch12 was the last one.

I have read a few other "Beauty and the Beast" stories, yours is definitely one of my favorites.

I love how he is more demonic than beastly, and everyone blames him for natural disasters and such makes your world seem realistic. I still do not understand how/why he was able to talk to the animals, those parts were obviously necessary but felt a bit random.

Boogie-Man is a wonderful Beast with his gentle soul yet scary figure. He still has his tantrums and fits (excessively violent) due to everyone's cruelty, you can't help but feel bad for him.

I wish you would not end here, I am heartbroken that Boogie-Man let her go, he deserves true love! ;-;
mia aurora chapter 13 . 7/14/2011
I love your 't stop :)
EmptySh3ll chapter 13 . 6/15/2011
Darn, I should have checked to see if this story was completed. I really like this story and hopefully you continue it.
anon chapter 11 . 6/13/2011
Good chapter with well-paced action.
anon chapter 2 . 6/12/2011
I see that you are still setting up the characters backstory here. I am confused by some things here like... "one day, the father came home early, still unsuccessful in his search, and caught his daughter polishing a freshly made blade." Wouldn't the father notice extra swords lying about? I would recommend either adding more details to explain this, or simply stating that the girl helped her father in the shop (without all that messy sneaking her about). Also the description of her is confusing, "Her once smooth, olive-toned skin was now greasy and covered with soot; and her hair...became matted, tangled and dirty...her clothes became torn and had been fixed by poor-quality stitches." I could understand if the girl just dressed in unflattering clothing and kept a low profile, but working as a blacksmith does not explain why she wouldn't wash her face.
anon chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
This is an interesting start to the story. I like the way you describe the beast. I also like the back story with the heartbroken little ginger boy. However, the whole bear-fighting issue was rather confusing. Why did he fight the bear? Why did the bear allow him to live, but he went ahead and killed the bear? Also, parts of the beast's rampage in the manor were confusing. For instance "It grabbed onto the kidney and liver" is sort-of unnessary. How does the beast know that it has grabbed these organs specifically? Why would the beast do this instead of just attacking? Details like this just slow down the pace.
J Ayne chapter 13 . 6/9/2011
Absolutely brilliant story :D i love Boogie Man
Hypergoddess chapter 13 . 6/6/2011
This was epic!~ Please continue I really want to see what happens next!
cupcakelover1553 chapter 13 . 6/5/2011
woweeeeee love it! plase please please update soon!.xxx
My.Brutal.Romance18 chapter 13 . 6/5/2011
I just found this story and stayed up all night to read it. Please Please Please update this I really hated the last chapter and I would like more!
Mononoke Lynn chapter 13 . 6/3/2011
I'm glad I caught this! I was looking around my ficitonpress reading list and popped in just to see, and bam! The last update here!
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