|Reviews for nous sommes sans coeur|
| Insanity Streak chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
This is a really thought- provoking poem. What I like about this poem is that it doesn't have a happy ending, it has a realistic ending. This line in particular: "and nothing can be done,because no matter what we do,it will all be washed away by flooding tides of the sea." this is what I mean, when you read the lines by themselves, sure they sound pessimistic, but with the whole poem, it feels like a truth people have been dismissing all this time.
Okay, spelling: 1. Coarse should be 'course' and 2. waist-land should be 'wasteland'
Plus, I hate when people say there is no hope for nothing. Great job with this piece. Very eloquent- could be read as a speech too.