Macie/Audrey?

Such a cute story! The beginning says macie instead of Audrey a lot though.

Did you model this character after Zack Morris from Saved By the Bell? It's perfect!

This is the type of story I want. If my love story were like this with a guy like Zach, life would be awesome.

I actually searched this song as I read. Haha. (I loved the whistling. Can't get it out of my head. *a bit sarcastically* Thank you for that, by the way.) I like this! Keep writing! D

This is beautifully written.

This was so cute! It gave me tingles - I love the popular guys who are also sweet!

very nice. thanks for sharing!

Although the summary sucked and was a bit too... Mushy, I read it and genuinely liked it

Naaawwwswss! This makes me so happy! :D So Mikey-Franking cute!

Oh my God, you have no idea how much this reminds me of... well of me. I love to sit there and doodle and song lyric and- crap! Can I be one of the characters in your stories? It'd fix like, every issue I've ever had! ;)

Oh, p.s. love the lyrics. Peter Bjorn and John - definitely a good choice!

So adorable. I love it, really.

I like that you included Zach and Audrey in "Blame the Neighborhood Cat"; it's nice to see more of them. Great job :)

Hiya :D

I haven't finished reading the entire story, which is really cute by the way (I really like your stories :3), but there is a repeated grammatical error that I have seen throughout your pieces. You say "lighted up." I figure, being a writer myself, that you would like to know the correct tense forms and such of words often used :). The past tense of the verb "light," is "lit," or "illuminated." I know that "illuminate" seems like an entirely different word, but it just... /flows/ in a sentence so much better than "lit," you know? I don't know, haha. It's just what I've learned through years of rigorous grammar training. And latin. Anyways.

You're amazing, you stories are amazing, uhm, yeah! :D

Awe! That was so cute! And your writing was amazing. :D

I love the deeper message about change, and staying the same and monitering the people around you and figuring out how they affect your life. This idea really hits home with me. I think this is super sweet, but like you said, goes beyond the simple sweetness and hits at something deeper.

-Watch out for long descriptions, I don't really care that he is six feet tall,just knowing he is taller than her will do. Show more than tell.

-Great realistic dialouge

-The part where he calles her Audrey instead of Macie threw me for a loop at first, until he used her double name.

-Awesome choice of lyrics