I loved your story and found it so endearing and entertaining, but you always do write wonderful stories. Thanks for sharing them all with me and all of your readers. - Shelley

Finally, this is so exciting. Here come the Marines. - Shelley

Wow what a shocker. Chernobyl, radiation-this story is so wonderfully original, I love it. - Shelley

What a God awful mother but I was happy that Sam and Cole talked it out. And I am enjoying your little quicky story.
Shelley

Although this chapter resolved nothing, it was great that Cole is keeping his promise to Sam. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in the next chapter. - Shelley

I was so into this story I went to the next chapter before I realized that I needed to leave my review. So here I am and I think this chapter moved the story forward. I hope Jai will be able to help her. So far no adult has stepped up to protect her. Now I'm onto the next chapter. - Shelley

I think it's time for Sam to use her power. The question is does her stepfather have any powers? - Shelley

This chapter was so sweet. I thought you did a great job of writing Cole's insecurities and he was so sweet when he asked her to be his girlfriend and of course the antics of the guys were fun to read. - Shelley

Now we're getting to the exciting part. I hope Cole finds out what's going on and can put a stop to it. See you next chapter. - Shelley

I like Cole for Sam. Hopefully he and the boys can protect her from that deviant. - Shelley

God this was a scary chapter. I feel just as scared as Sam does. Where is her mother to protect her? I'm going to read the next chapter and see if I can't find out. - Shelley

I'm intrigued by this story and have so many unanswered questions. But I thought this chapter was very helpful in developing your storyline and characters. So I'm onto the next chapter. - Shelley

I'm so curious to find out more. It's like a mystery-do they all have secret powers and who is Jae since the boys also know him? Intriguing chapter. - Shelley

I think I'm going to like this story very much. I realize you wrote this story quite awhile ago, however I only found fictionpress and your stories about seven months ago and I already love your writing style and the creativity you put into your stories. I can't wait to see how you develop Sam's character and the storyline, but her stepfather is already giving me the creeps. Great beginning. - Shelley

I love this so much you did anamzing job! Keep up the wonderful job and wright more wonderful stories!