Reviews for Grateful
Knickers chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
really beautiful
NeeddaS chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Remarkable piece. Beautifully done. Write on and God Bless.
Fate Retold chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
I adore this fic! I have the biggest smile on my face. Hopefully I'll be able to write something as happy, peaceful, and beautiful one day. Because, really, this is the way we should look at things. This was absoluetly beautiful. :)
theheartsbeat chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
I'm grateful for what God has given to me, too. This really inspired me. Wonderful job!
Someone chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Great poem, truly.

One teeny tiny problem.

The word. That's right. The word G-d.

You are only writing from one point of view. And that is the one of a really happy christian or catholic. And that isn't the best way to go.

Don't get me wrong, your poem is great I really like the way you express your self and such, but when writing a poem from one point of view is good, to write from many views will be much better.
Dragon-Rider II chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Wow. This is beautiful.

Yeah, there's so many things we should be grateful for, it's impossible to list them all.

And some people don't have some of these things, which makes us more grateful.

This is beautifully written, and the message is beautiful too.