Reviews for Play Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It just keeps getting better and better. :) sorry I missed the last few chapters, but it was nice to get to read them all in one go. -pj |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I must say Joan's an interesting character. :p I love her personality and how she doesn't swoon over any guys. Keep updating! And the part where Thacker's frown fell, I was like lololol. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was good so far... don't wory about the lay.. it sounds fine |
![]() ![]() ![]() A few grammatical errors here and there, but they don't hinder the story whatsoever. Also, I like how you switch POVs. For some reason it works within the confines of your story and also heightens the tension for readers. :) Do hope you continue to update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg. LOL, Joan's realy strong! I like her attitude! ;P I'm currently busy at school, my story would take time and reviews too. :( But keep updating, honey! I love it! P.S. there are little grammatical errors here and there but it's fine. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wo! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ("No, you are right" Hayden said quite calm. "A girl treating you, like you usually treat them, that's not funny…" there was a dramatically pause. "It's freaking hilarious!") OH MY GOD. :p That's a hard slap in the face! Update soon, I'll be waiting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL, Oh nonono! Thacker did not just! ;P Update soon, I'll be a loyal fan! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I'll have to say this is an interesting story. *Be off to chapter two* |
![]() ![]() I love it! Keep updating! |