Reviews for Who I am in a Monologue
swag chapter 1 . 4/3/2017
nice
Alexa chapter 1 . 12/14/2016
I loved this so much... i loved the abandoned without ever being alone part.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2015
This is amazing! You have a real talent!
Hamlet Survives chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
very very good (high five, low five, psh!)

but u r not allowed to sing while you drown. thats someone elses job : )
Angel Investor chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Pretty impressing, in regards to grammar and spelling, for a first entry on this site. However, I think it felt like a mere list rather than a monologue. That is just my opinion, though. Furthermore, I don't really see the point of this entire piece. Is it a metaphor-practice, a self-discovery put into words or something way different?

That aside I spotted one error:

"spanI/span am brown eyes and dirty blonde curls."

It looks like there's a serious typo or something in the beginning of that sentence.

Keep writing. You have skills. You don't have to heed me on this, but I think you should try writing actual stories and/or poems too.