Reviews for The Fall of the House of Veadra |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow, i didn't see that coming. at all. my mouth dropped open haha. that was awesome. good job and excellent end to the first chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stories about royal families in faraway fantasy lands are my favorite, and that you're writing one only makes it better. Can't wait to see how the dynamics work out here, and how much trouble our underdogs can give nasty Harold upon their return. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so interesting! Harold must have some hold on Juliana's people, because it's crazy that Juliana can only trust a handful of people. Seems like since she's the actual monarch, they would be more willing to believe her. Hope to find out more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Goodness, you update fast. I've been helplessly sucked into this, and now I almost wish this was a full-length story...it seems like the background is really involved and interesting. Angsty as it is, I'm enjoying it-and if I didn't have to wake up early, I'd continue to chapter 3. Oh well, hopefully I'll get to chapter 3 tomorrow. Keeping my fingers crossed for Harold's demise |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish I'd paid attention to the "angst" label. Your characters are too believable for me to avoid feeling their grief. :( |
![]() ![]() Thank you! I love it. Poor Juliana. Harold needs a good kick in the balls. It is maybe a little too short, though, no? |