Reviews for The Fall of the House of Veadra
Victoria Stokes chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
wow, i didn't see that coming. at all. my mouth dropped open haha. that was awesome. good job and excellent end to the first chapter.
Le Meg chapter 4 . 1/17/2011
Stories about royal families in faraway fantasy lands are my favorite, and that you're writing one only makes it better. Can't wait to see how the dynamics work out here, and how much trouble our underdogs can give nasty Harold upon their return. ;)
decadebydecade chapter 3 . 1/14/2011
This is so interesting! Harold must have some hold on Juliana's people, because it's crazy that Juliana can only trust a handful of people. Seems like since she's the actual monarch, they would be more willing to believe her. Hope to find out more

soon!
decadebydecade chapter 2 . 1/13/2011
Goodness, you update fast.

I've been helplessly sucked into this, and now I almost wish this was a full-length story...it seems like the background is really involved and interesting.

Angsty as it is, I'm enjoying it-and if I didn't have to wake up early, I'd continue to chapter 3.

Oh well, hopefully I'll get to chapter 3 tomorrow.

Keeping my fingers crossed for Harold's demise
decadebydecade chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
I wish I'd paid attention to the "angst" label.

Your characters are too believable for me to avoid feeling their grief. :(
Cathy chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
Thank you! I love it. Poor Juliana. Harold needs a good kick in the balls.

It is maybe a little too short, though, no?
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