|Reviews for The Mysterious Girl in Black|
| ishchan17 chapter 3 . 11/19/2013
ughhh mrs ryan is such a bitchy teacher. sorry for the language but I absolutely HATE favoritism -_- she didn't even hear Melissa's side of the story... lol anyways, I'm guessing you did a perfect job in building up the anger of the readers for this chapter. thumbs up :-bd
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/19/2013
Melissa's sarcasm is annoying yet funny at the same time. I wonder if she's a tsundere or something ::
| ishchan17 chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
ohhh I thought you were going to keep her name anonymous until the end of the story. But surprise surprise it's at the end of the CHAPTER : I like this story of yours and I bet it's going to be a fun read :D
| Bloodyrose125255 chapter 37 . 1/7/2013
Your story is just...beautiful. There are no other words to describe it. You wrote amazingly well and I absolutely fell in love with each and everyone of your characters, and I mean EVERYONE. I can't wait to read more of your stories.
| George Winston chapter 28 . 8/3/2012
The story is getting more suspence as it continues to progress. I call this an art. Nobody in the world could write this unique as this. I'll say you have exceeded great expectations and hopefully, this story will be a favorite around the world.
| George Winston chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
What a story. I like love-hate relationship but this is even better.
The drama, the excitement, it's very interesting! I'll keep reading this until it ends at the last chapter.
One last thing, I don't see any grammatical errors here, so good job!
| MissLjones chapter 37 . 6/5/2012
Wow! What a lovely story, I'm really glad that MissKluck told me about this story and made me read it! You're a very good author :)
| monkeyface1 chapter 30 . 4/6/2012
let me sum my comment into 4 words so i dont write something the sixe of this chapter (holyshit-heartbroken)!
| monkeyface1 chapter 29 . 4/6/2012
first off ginger and leonardo are so freakin cute! but dam is ginger fiesty anyway second i feel bad for luke but that doesnt mean that i dont want takashi and melissa together. Please dont tell me she cut her hair like a boy! ahhh i love this freakin story!
| monkeyface1 chapter 28 . 4/6/2012
for a minute you had me scared i thought she really changed towards her brother and plus takashi's father is so dam mean! i mean what kind of dad would keep his daughter away from her brother but thank god elara just played along!
| visaga chapter 37 . 3/6/2012
this was amashing. I couldn't find any errors and it flowed really well! Glad that you didn't end it with a sad ending or a cliffhanger. 333333
| sofab chapter 37 . 3/6/2012
Yay! just read
| SkySketcher chapter 37 . 2/8/2012
Oh gosh that was so sweet! hahahaha I didn't notice you finished before, I've barely came on. But aaaah! so cute! Good job, glad you finished and didn't leave us hanigng
| angelicparadox chapter 35 . 2/5/2012
OH MY SQUASH! IT IS ME! WOOOOT! I'M SO COOL. I was mentioned TWICE in TWO different chapters mwhahahahahaaaa. I feel so special. :') I love the line, "I think the reason why there is sorrow is because, without sorrow, joy would mean nothing. Without death, life would mean nothing. And without murder..." I was like, 'OMG That's so truuuuuuue!' How do you think of these things? Anyway, asdfghjkl; I wanted her to end up with Ichiro though! D: In my mind, he's a-d-o-r-a-b-l-e. LOL I guess Takeshi's good too. :'( But he's too nice! _ Ugghhh, who's Ruth? Why she steal my ichiro's heart? He could have at least ended up with Amelia... GOOD JOB THOUGH! I loved your story! _
| MissKluck chapter 37 . 1/31/2012
Oh, so sweet! 3 Melissa and Takashi is finally engaged :D and now Abby has become a friend too. This epilogue was really good, and it made a really good ending to the story :) Thx so much for this wonderful story! You're a great writer and I'll look forward to read more from you