Reviews for The Mysterious Girl in Black |
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ishchan17 chapter 3 . 11/19/2013 ughhh mrs ryan is such a bitchy teacher. sorry for the language but I absolutely HATE favoritism -_- she didn't even hear Melissa's side of the story... lol anyways, I'm guessing you did a perfect job in building up the anger of the readers for this chapter. thumbs up :-bd |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/19/2013 Melissa's sarcasm is annoying yet funny at the same time. I wonder if she's a tsundere or something :: |
ishchan17 chapter 1 . 11/19/2013 ohhh I thought you were going to keep her name anonymous until the end of the story. But surprise surprise it's at the end of the CHAPTER : I like this story of yours and I bet it's going to be a fun read :D |
Bloodyrose125255 chapter 37 . 1/7/2013 Your story is just...beautiful. There are no other words to describe it. You wrote amazingly well and I absolutely fell in love with each and everyone of your characters, and I mean EVERYONE. I can't wait to read more of your stories. |
George Winston chapter 28 . 8/3/2012 The story is getting more suspence as it continues to progress. I call this an art. Nobody in the world could write this unique as this. I'll say you have exceeded great expectations and hopefully, this story will be a favorite around the world. |
George Winston chapter 1 . 8/2/2012 What a story. I like love-hate relationship but this is even better. The drama, the excitement, it's very interesting! I'll keep reading this until it ends at the last chapter. One last thing, I don't see any grammatical errors here, so good job! |
MissLjones chapter 37 . 6/5/2012 Wow! What a lovely story, I'm really glad that MissKluck told me about this story and made me read it! You're a very good author :) |
monkeyface1 chapter 30 . 4/6/2012 let me sum my comment into 4 words so i dont write something the sixe of this chapter (holyshit-heartbroken)! |
monkeyface1 chapter 29 . 4/6/2012 first off ginger and leonardo are so freakin cute! but dam is ginger fiesty anyway second i feel bad for luke but that doesnt mean that i dont want takashi and melissa together. Please dont tell me she cut her hair like a boy! ahhh i love this freakin story! |
monkeyface1 chapter 28 . 4/6/2012 for a minute you had me scared i thought she really changed towards her brother and plus takashi's father is so dam mean! i mean what kind of dad would keep his daughter away from her brother but thank god elara just played along! |
visaga chapter 37 . 3/6/2012 this was amashing. I couldn't find any errors and it flowed really well! Glad that you didn't end it with a sad ending or a cliffhanger. 333333 |
sofab chapter 37 . 3/6/2012 Yay! just read |
SkySketcher chapter 37 . 2/8/2012 Oh gosh that was so sweet! hahahaha I didn't notice you finished before, I've barely came on. But aaaah! so cute! Good job, glad you finished and didn't leave us hanigng |
angelicparadox chapter 35 . 2/5/2012 OH MY SQUASH! IT IS ME! WOOOOT! I'M SO COOL. I was mentioned TWICE in TWO different chapters mwhahahahahaaaa. I feel so special. :') I love the line, "I think the reason why there is sorrow is because, without sorrow, joy would mean nothing. Without death, life would mean nothing. And without murder..." I was like, 'OMG That's so truuuuuuue!' How do you think of these things? Anyway, asdfghjkl; I wanted her to end up with Ichiro though! D: In my mind, he's a-d-o-r-a-b-l-e. LOL I guess Takeshi's good too. :'( But he's too nice! _ Ugghhh, who's Ruth? Why she steal my ichiro's heart? He could have at least ended up with Amelia... GOOD JOB THOUGH! I loved your story! _ |
MissKluck chapter 37 . 1/31/2012 Oh, so sweet! 3 Melissa and Takashi is finally engaged :D and now Abby has become a friend too. This epilogue was really good, and it made a really good ending to the story :) Thx so much for this wonderful story! You're a great writer and I'll look forward to read more from you |