Reviews for The Mysterious Girl in Black |
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MissKluck chapter 36 . 1/24/2012 The last chapter huh? It was really good and Takashi's engagement to Abby is off so he can stay with Melissa! :D I'm really happy now and Amelia can start a "new" life and all. Sometimes it was a bit hard to follow since you suddenly shifted scene, but else, just wonderful :D I'll just wait for the epilogue then thx so much for this story! :D |
MissKluck chapter 35 . 1/20/2012 Oh my gosh! Takashi! He can't die! :O And Melissa going into shock and locking everyone out again, this can't happen! The chapter started out so good and peaceful, and then this. Please update fast! :) |
angelicparadox chapter 32 . 1/14/2012 When I saw the bottom of chapter two I was like, "OMG THAT'S ME! LOOK! LOOK YOU GUYS THAT'S MEEE!" LOL no problem! I always read a chapter or two in my science class secretly. It's best if they're short, so I don't have to rush and skip half the story. KEEP WRITING! :) |
MissKluck chapter 34 . 1/12/2012 Finally is seeing reason :D and Elara is such a nice person, the same goes for Lauren and her friends :D Also it is really good that Amelia and Melissa finally get to talk properly to each other! I really look forward to the next chapter :D thx for the story ;) |
MissKluck chapter 33 . 1/12/2012 Hah! I knew that Amelia remembered Alyssa! Also Melissa and Takashi kissed again :D And they are going to speak to Takashi's mom! I really hope that they'll sort things out! You are Really good at writing :D Thx for the amazing story! :D |
MissKluck chapter 32 . 1/12/2012 Ooo, so Ichiro likes Melissa as well, huh? Interesting... :P I hope that Takashi's father gets better, even though I doubt it... Still love the story :D thx |
SkySketcher chapter 32 . 12/10/2011 Yay! its about time, oh my gosh I absolutely love this story but it took forever for this next chapter to come up! Its so brilliant I read this whole thing in one day last month and was waiting for you to continue. Please please please write more! If you dont…*tear* stupid takashi, he thinks too much about loves consequences… |
angelicparadox chapter 30 . 11/10/2011 UWAAAAAAA! I SWEAR I'M GOING TO THROW AN ONON AT YOU (just cuz I don'tt like Onions :) UPDATEEEEE! I finished all your chapters (including chapter 31) in 3 days. I love how your chapters are short! Because of school its nice to sneak in a chapter without having to make myself rush and not thoroughly understanding the chapter. I hope ichiro falls head over heels for her and is comepltly obsessed! In my opinon I love it when all the guys like one girl, which should be the main character. I'm not to happy about Luke with another girl though... Made h can still those moments when his stomache has butterflies to make I even more exciting...? You don't have to but I think it wouod make me want to read even more... :) BUT OH MY SQUASH I LOVE THIS STORY! It's my favourite on all of fictionpress! ... So far :) ...I adore love triangles. Even more if there s much bigger! \(_)/ ichiro should show some loveeee! Anyways... Sorry for the super long eview... I just have so much to say :/ oh and one more thing! I like all the japanese names! Ther're what makes a manga... Or a part of it :) oh goshh... I keep making this longer... Okay then. No I shall leave. *sniff* UPDATTEEE QUICKLYYY PLEASEEEEEEE! |
MissKluck chapter 31 . 11/2/2011 Awww, so sweet :) her parents finally got to know (almost) everything :D Thanks for the new chapter, just waiting for the next one now :P as long as Takashi's father doesn't do anything more stupid, he has already done enough -.- thx again :D |
MissKluck chapter 30 . 10/25/2011 I just found the story yesterday and I think it is amazing :D please keep on updating! |
RockPrincess410 chapter 30 . 10/22/2011 I think you're story's awesome ! You should keep writing. Update soon ) |
monkeyface1 chapter 27 . 9/8/2011 holy shit! he's father really got elara there is noway! i thought he was really mean and wow she sounds purty ;)anywayz ichiro seems nice and him and melissa are so alike..hhehehehehe im waiting for next thursdays chapter! and thanks forupdating! |
DangoAndSouls chapter 26 . 9/2/2011 Accidents, twists and turns. This story has everything! SO Great! |
monkeyface1 chapter 26 . 9/1/2011 awww of corse im supporting you and i always will! this is such a great story it cant be stopped! the story must go on! and this dude ichiro asari he's just like melissa which is so funny...hehhe and im so happy melissa is ok and she confessed her love to takashi and so did he. eeeeee im so freaking happy i cant wait for the next one! :) |
want to be deleted dont use chapter 25 . 8/30/2011 keep going |