Hi. It is so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) OMG Melissa got twin sister. And her name is Alyssa. I am wonder what happen to Alyssa? *curiously* How does Alyssa die? *curiously* Now I understand why Melissa felt so empty because her twin sister died. Poor Melissa. :( OMG Alyssa help Ameila. I am wonder why? *curiously* Ah Alyssa and Melissa are very close sisters and best friend forever. It must be tough time for Melissa to lose her sister. No wonder Melissa want to be alone after her twin sister die. Poor Melissa. :( Ah Alyssa dream to be get marry and have kids. And Melissa is the opposite twin. I am hope that Melissa will follow her dreams from her heart when she set to her careers and her future when she enrol in uni. :) I am wonder why Ameilia never mention to Melissa about Alyssa? *curiously* Why every students hate Melissa so much but always kind toward to Alyssa? *curiously* Ah Melissa like Takeshi. I am hope there will be romance between both in this story. :) I am wonder why Melissa won't talk to Takeshi about Alyssa? *curiously* Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I am look forward to read the next chapters of your story. Don't stop writing. :D It is amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) By the way, I am so sorry to take so long to check out your story because I was sick since wed two weeks ago and I feel so better now since yesterday. Yay. :D And I got the problem with vodafone since wed. Now its work since yesterday. Yay. :D The reason why I give you the long review because you deserve it for hard work to write this story and I really love this story so much. :) I am hope that you will write Abby's story and Ameilia's story in the future. :D I am look forward to read this story until the end because I am so curious about what happen next in this story. :D

Poor Takahashi-kun~... :'(

I feel worse for Melissa... D':

O.O Good question.. xD Lol

o.o Go Takahasi~!

Aww~. Poor Melissa!

FA-BU-LOUS! I loved it so much!

Hi. It is so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am wonder why Mrs Ryans hate Melissa so much? What is reason behind Mrs Ryans's mask? *curiously* I can see that Melissa love her cat so much. Thats good. :) Hope that Melissa should talk with someone beside her parents to understand her. I think she should open up to Takeshi. They are perfect match for each other. :) I am wonder why Melissa always go to church and talk with 'her'? Who is the mystery girl that Melissa kept mention to Ginger? *curiously* Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I am look forward to read the next chapters of your story. Don't stop writing. :D It is amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :)

Hi. It is so beautiful chapter. I love it. :) Aww Melissa got a cat. Thats so cute. :) Ginger is so beautiful name for the cat. How old is Ginger? *curiously* What kind of meeting that Melissa complete forget about it? *curiously* Why the Chief is being nosy what Melissa up to? *curiously* Aww Ginger follow Melissa and loves blueberry muffins. How cute. :) Why does Ginger hiss to Takeshi? *curiously* OMG The princess insult to Mrs Parker about the bagel. Poor thing. :( I am wonder who is 'she' the one that Melissa chat with her cat? *curiously* I am glad that Takeshi accept the favour that Mrs Parker ask him. Yay! :D Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I am lnok forward to read the next chapters of your story. Don't stop writing. :D It is amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :)

Hi. It is so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) OMG Abigail is the daughter of Mr Lennington and follow Takeshi like a love sick puppy. Poor Takeshi. :( How dare Abigail insult Melissa and judge her of her appearance. Abigail should not judge Melissa by the book of cover. Thats very rude of Abigail say that to Melissa front of Takeshi. Abigail should not get involve Takeshi in the conservation with Melissa. Poor Melissa. :( OMG Abigail and Amelia are cousins. I dislike how Abigail treat Melissa like that. Poor Melissa. :( I am glad that Melissa rescue Takeshi from Abigail. Thats so sweet of her. :) I am wonder why no one like Melissa? What reason behind of her mask? *curiously* It is amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. I am off to read the next chapter now. :)

Hi. It is so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I don't understand why Amelia is bully to Melissa. Poor Melissa. :( I dislike Amelia because she is too spoilt brat and be so cold bitch she is. One day she will marry a playerboy or womanizer heir of the company to be alliance with her company and never will faithful husband to her. Thats what backfire will be pay to Amelia to be miserable with her life. I dislike Mrs Ryans because she shouldn't treat Melissa like low class she is. Mrs Ryans is too blind to see the truth behind Amelia's sweet face. Amelia and Mrs Ryans's beauty will be become ugly and bitter rest of their life. A jealous and hate will make Amelia and Mrs Ryans become ugly women. Its not good health for them. I am glad that Mrs Coleman is good teacher and be fair with her students. :) I am wonder if Melissa's school just for girls? *curiously* Why does Melissa always go to church? What is so special about the church? *curiously* Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I am look forward to read the next chapters of your story. Don't stop writing. :D It is amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) I am so interesting in this story and want to know what happen next please. :D By the way, can you read my stories when you have time please? Thanks. :)

Hi. It is so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am wonder why Melissa is upset about? Is it something happen in her past? *curiously* It'll be nice if Melissa's parents buy her a pet for her birthday or christmas present. :) I am wonder why Mr Lennington is try to set up Takashi with his daughter? Is it because Mr Lennington wants to get Takashi's company with his business to gain powerful and more wealthy man? *curiously* I dislike Mr Lennington and there is strange about him. Hope Takashi don't plan to show up at all. I am wonder what happen to Takashi's mother? Does she died? Or is his parents divorce? *curiously* I hope Takashi stay in east side and make his own business so he can be close to Melissa please. I am wonder what grade Melissa in? What is Melissa's dream job she want to be? *curiously* I am wonder why Takashi follow Melissa to her school? *curiously* It is amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. I am off to read the next chapter now. :)

Hi. It is so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am wonder how old are Melissa and Takashi? *curiously* I am wonder where Melissa disappear to and always show up for meals? *curiously* It will be nice if Melissa have a cat or dog to kept her company. :) I am wonder why Melissa hate Takashi? What's reason that she hate wealthy people so much? Is it because of her past? *curiously* I am wonder if Melissa is only child of Parker family? *curiously* Does Takashi never use his surname when he meet new people? I am wonder why? *curiously* I am wonder who is so close to Melissa and died? *curiously* It is amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. I am off to read the next chapter now. :)

So far, a very interesting beginning. I like how you use such descriptive words, and i felt as if i was a part of the book, watching in from the outside. I love how you ended it with a cliffhanger, Takashi seems so have some sort of interest in Melissa. I do think she is kind of mysterious, how she just snaps like that. One minute she's kind and then 2 seconds later she snaps at you. She seems like a character who probably as gone through tough things in her life, (just a guess) i enjoyed the first chapter a lot, i can't wait for more of this.

I'll keep an eye out for updates.

:) 9/10 overall. Keep up the good work!

This is really good so far! You write very well, and the ending made me want more. Can't wait to see what happens next. Maybe you could check out my story, Ishiki. I'd love to get your opinion on it :)