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toinfinity chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
I really enjoyed this, Jackson's internal thought, his quiet tongue. and laurel, how you portrayed him so innocently while at the same time giving him little qualities that weren't. your writing is all really beautiful.
WishmiesterBeta chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
I like your writing style, the numbered sections and complete lack of capitalization. It's refreshing to read.

I also like how vague this is sometimes, giving an outline of what's happening, with specific details splashed in. I'm really not a one-shot fan, but yours are always awesome.