Oh my gosh! I love this more than I would think possible! I wonder when you will update the next chapter? I was also wondering if a couple chapters back, you meant to have the whole chapter italic? I have nothing helpful to say really except; I LOVE THIS!

Who is the man in the suit? And by the way Ch. 20 and Ch. 21 are the same chapter... anyway. Great story! keep posting

love it! update soon. :)

This is an awesome chapter. Cassidy finally crosses over :) I can't wait 'til the next chapter!

Love the chapter. The part of the little girl crossing over was so sweet. I can't wait to read more!

Wowza. I just read chapters 16 and 17 and all I can say is wowza. Please keep adding more chapters. I can't wait to find out if Cassidy will finally cross over and leave Natalie alone. :D

I LOVE this chapter. My mouth was practically dropped open the entire time lol. Very creepy. Keep up the good work!

This was incredible, I cannot WAIT until the further chapters . . . I actually started on my story like this yesterday . . . . one quick question:

Is this really happening to you? If so, you're not alone, this happens to me. I see them, they want things, they hurt me. If this is real to you, please, contact me, I need to know I'm not alone in this

I just need to ask you something. Is it alright if most chapters aren't very long? all my chapters for the story I am making turn out short. And i mean, really short. I don't know why it just seems like they are supposed to be short and end right then.

I love this story. I read every chapter. I like the suspence of it. Very well done. I hope I can be as good as you are someday. I'm still young so I have a lot to learn. Keep on writing this story. I want to know more. :D

I really like this story. Hope you update soon :D