great story!

Will you update?

Tarah xXx

Good story: the characters are very like-able. Keep it up that great work!

Good story line although it is chalked full of many grammar and spelling issues. For example you said, “I woke up from it and lead in bed for hours.” Possibly you lied in the bed for hours?

Also, punctuation goes within a quotation and outside of parenthesis.

It’s an awesome dream, and a great stepping stone with right tools!

Best of luck in your writing.

Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Great story! I really want to know what'll happen next! I love the three characters... I wonder what Kate's "power" will be... Perhaps something like super good intuition?

Maybe you could correct the few spelling mistakes/typos (Sorry for being fussy! It just stops the flow of the story _

three sisters, three vampires-what a dream this must have been. You're doing a great job with this; enjoying it very much.

First of all, your summary is what got me to read this; so, it can't be half-as-bad-as-you-think. Love the mystery; love the suspense and the unknown of what happened. Keep up the good work. I’ll be around to read more.

I must have empathy powers too :(

I know, I suck but I don't have time to really review.

What is wrong with her