Reviews for A Balance of Harmonies |
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TinaLouise chapter 135 . 8/30/2013 Poor Emil. I hate being sick so I understand how he feels (as i write this in a doctors waiting room). Hopefully Peregrine will notice. Interesting about Kurt's dad. Hopefully he takes that leap and gets with the man he loves. |
TinaLouise chapter 134 . 8/18/2013 Did you change the first part from the LJ version? It seems to run much better here. It may just be the second read through. |
Cassie chapter 131 . 7/31/2013 Sorry, I was mistaken! I started reading this story a week ago and I think it had an older last updated date, but it was updated mid-reading and I didn't realize. Yay! I'm so excited this is still continuing...I would love a little more drama or angst, I just feel that at this early stage (4 or 5 months I think at this point), there would still be a lot of figuring things out, hurt feelings, miscommunications, etc. There would be for a couple, much less a triple. Again, thanks for writing such a fascinating story! I can't wait for more! |
Cassie chapter 131 . 7/31/2013 Oh no! It ends so abruptly...I am completely addicted to Kurt, Peregrine and Emil's story. I see there hasn't been an update in awhile, but I hope it will continue. Thank you for writing! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2013 Any chance we could get this next update in the early morning? I leave for boot camp around noon and I'd love to be able to read one last chapter before I go :) |
LilyLuna chapter 130 . 7/23/2013 Wow...That was pretty intense. I was not expecting that when I started this chapter. I really realy liked it though. Keep up the good work. :) |
Guest chapter 130 . 7/22/2013 Wow. Awesome chapter. |
TinaLouise chapter 129 . 7/18/2013 I have to say, I love Ezra's and Noah's parents. They are so fun. |
TinaLouise chapter 45 . 7/17/2013 I re-read bits and pieces of Harmonies on days where I need the comfort of friends, even if they're only fictional. I do this with other stories as well. The other times I read this chapter I always felt more on the side of Ivory. Today I feel for Zipfel. He is cling |
Goldenstars chapter 122 . 5/21/2013 I love that Christmas is set now instead of parallel to life! It makes me happy just thinking about it. The tree making was cute. But the best bit about this chapter was JJ! So happy to hear about him. As much as I want everything to work out for him, and him and Hunter, the conflict is interesting to read. But I still wish things to work out. |
TinaLouise chapter 121 . 5/13/2013 For some reason this feels like a bonus update even though its the weekly one. As always, the update brightened my day. The story has felt like it is winding down for a while but now with Emil's family showing up it feels like it's picking up again. Off to continue reading Are You Together again. |
Goldenstars chapter 120 . 5/7/2013 Oh my. This is fantastic. To think that nobody in your family cared but to find out the complete opposite. I was wondering what was going to happen with Tom. An autograph didn't seem the whole story and it's not, ha! I really like how there's a fully developed story with each family. |
methosdeb chapter 120 . 5/7/2013 loved it ,I just knew something was up with that worker in the house,he must have figured it out too.I am glad that Emil will get some kind of closure with the answers he has needed with his biological was very good with him too,just knew what he needed. |
Goldenstars chapter 119 . 4/28/2013 I'm glad that Kurt is not using the ticket his Mother bought for him! She is so frustrating. I am really hoping she gets put in her place or something similar. But Clara is great, It's nice that he has at least one nice relative. |
theStarfly chapter 119 . 4/28/2013 It's so sweet how concerned Emil was! And I'm really glad that Peregrine realizes that he relies on Kurt too much. That was bothering me (just a teensy bit). I'm excited to see how he's going to try to make up for it! Can't wait for the next chapter. Sorry I don't review too often. I'll try to leave more comments. I noticed a few chapters back that the writing was getting less descriptive, and more like it was just trying to get the story down on the page as quickly as possible, but I don't really see that any more. It was like it was a little bit of a phase, but now your writing is back where it was before? I don't know if that makes sense or not. But it has gotten better now. Do you have plans to go back through and edit it, etc, when you're completely finished? |