Reviews for Aberrance Avoidance
jammi chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
On one hand I'm glad I got to read this because it made me laugh and even though it's short you get so much emotion and humour across as well as setting up the world enough so it's familiar without you having to explain everything and has a lot of components that I just love.

On the other hand, I really want to read more, argh, lol. But brilliant one-shot, I really enjoyed it.

Also I loved the "Either way: apology denied." comment before he headbutts him, LOL.
Seldom Besant chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Fantastic one-shot! :D This was a lot of fun to read, and I hated that it had to end- you could really turn this into a multi-chaptered fic if you wanted, there's SO much potential. You've got ALL the elements I adore in a Sci-Fi fic and beyond. I'm intrigued to know more about Vivi and the Captain's past, and embroiling them in some kind of adventure again would be absolute awesome sauce, haha. You're an excellent writer, and I sincerely hope you continue to write more in the future! :D
Avra-Sha Faohla chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
I really like your style, Oni. It's quick, witty, and fun. This was a very enjoyable read.
Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
I love this! Also, curse you, I want to know more. ;) But that's how good short stories should be, and this is really good. There were a few missing commas here and there, but other than that... perfect. :D