Reviews for Butterflies
TripleMelody chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
This is a really beautiful piece of writing.

I can completely relate to not being able to forget and move on, and you've expressed this feeling so beautifully.

Fantastic writing!

Melody :)
Fellow Soilder of Pain chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
I dated this girl for 2 and 1/2 years. We broke up almost a year ago now and the mere thought of her still cripples me. I gave her absolutely everything I never knew I had. Maybe that was my first mistake. I know what you're going through. And just know that it will, even though you refuse to believe these words, get better. Promise. Good song.
Rayne Shadows chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
A) Thanks for the review!

B) For the longest time after a year and a half long relationship, I couldn't get my mind off of this girl. Every time I saw her I was overcome by a powerful swarm of butterflies within my stomach. She had total control over me. I didn't know how to get away from her. While I did finally break her hold on me, I know how this feels and it SUCKS. Great writing, keep at it.