Reviews for My High School Life
Celestial-Panda chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Poor Amanda... Hmm, I wonder how that party will go.. :) Keep writing! ]
Amaterasu Ai chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
pretty good, this is the first fiction press story i read though... hey, but pretty good it'll be interesting to see where things go
PJ Draft chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Nice story so far. Isabella is a great character so far. Usually when people write fat 'ugly' duckling stories the ruin it by announceing the main character is 140 pounds with an average height. (Sicking I know but you see it sometimes) Isabella on the other hand is real and she doesn't hate her weight but instead hates the way people treat her because of it. Go isabella, go! Anyway please do continue with a chocolate cherry on top? Also, there are a couple easily fixed mistakes especially in the paragraph where she tells us about herself. Read it over they can be easily fixed. Anyway update soon.
VampireWerewolf5150 chapter 1 . 1/15/2011 have to continue on the story please i really want to know if jason and isabella get togather...
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