FDKVHDSJFV SO I just read ALL your story and it was AMAZING! I WAAAS SO: "GO THOMAS! GO THOMAS!" ISDUFHJG I LOVE THOMAS! HE BECAME SOOOO DAMN CUTE.

Great story really. In some parts I was a the verge of crying :')

Awesome really. There were some minor misspelling but it was great :D

Yay! Nice one shot, btw. :D what was Jason going to say? Something like "do you want to go out?"

ohhhhh! I like this version!

awww Jason confessed to Izzy :)

though i prefer her with Thomas more :D

Cool, so this is what would've happened, huh? Well, I think she should still have tried to lose the weight because it would be better for her health and all...Yeah.

Oh, yeah. During the dialogue parts, when you end it with a period and then put, 'she said', 'she exclaimed', or something like that, replace the period with a comma when ending the dialogue...

~Miyako

ok ok, this is hilarioous...! i mean, drama would never had happend... like you qould have save 42 chapters, if jason jmust had the balls and told her at the freaking beginning"! sorry it's just hilarious :P i'm laughing so hard i'm crying, god... i just can't believe it...

you are amazing :P

ok but wait.. so this chapter mmm... oneshot? is the beginning of another story? i'm not sure if i got that right...

anyway.. good chapie :P i guess that whinning about jason for 43 chapters got me somewhere huh? hahaha

lol

:3

-M

what i think is that Rachel manipulated Thomas' hate for Isabella Ace so that he would break up with her

omg Rachel is such a bitch! : /3

poor Thomas /3 :'(

Lame. This book could have had been 600 times better if you didn't have us choosing who she would end up with. You are the author, you make the decisions. Not the readers. That just really ticked me off, and I hope that next time you attempt to do a live triangle you decide who wins in the end. If I were Isabella I would beverages forgive Thomas. He called me fat and made my life hell, and when I get skinny he instantly thinks I'm the best. Heck no! And secondly, it doesn't matter if I killed your parents. You ruined My High School Life. Looking forward to more of your work though! :D

i might not like them together but this alternate ending was really cutee :D

and what was jason about to say im really curious

YES! lol I can't wait for the sequel!

Omg I can't believe it's over! Wow.

Great epilogue! :D The last part when Amanda was talking made me laugh xD.

This was such an awesome story! :DD Great job bestie _

Hey angellover254! :D I love your your works, they're always so creative! Anyway, I loved this story. When I finished it, I was like NOOO! THAT'S THE END! :)

A few things, one I think you shouldn't use the word "crash" every single time someone kisses someone else. It gets a little old after a while.

Second, I think you should change the names of John and Thomas. Since you'll be rewriting it, you can change names right? Here are the reasons: John is like those olden day names that go with the last name Smith. So, it's just kinda weird for a college student to have a name like that.

As for Thomas, in the begining, I didn't know that Isabella would end up with Thomas. I thought Thomas was, well, the "bad guy". So I didn't care if the name was kinda lame. But since Isabella ends up with him, I thought you could change it with a cooler name.

Also, I was kinda disappointed when Isabella didn't end up with Jason. :( I thought the two of them would be better (yes, I'm a Jason fan). And sorry I didn't review while this story was going, I was doing some other stuff.

I LOVE this story! I think I'll read your rewrite if I have time! :D Keep writing! :)

Can I say that I loved this story! Especially since I read it all the way from beginning to end. The only thing that I'm sad about is that she didn't fall for Jason. I was sooooo rooting for him. Oh well. It was still an awesome story. :)

*cough, cough*...

Breath in breath out breath in breath out. OMG! IT FINISHED! !

Awww but i like this story. :( * someones got a frowny face* ha sorry i had to say that. its of despicible me! ha love that movie. Sigh. anyway, i Soooo totally LOVE GABE NOW! HOW WEIRD IS THAT? yeah i was really confused with myself but meh! (sigh) at leat rachel and gabe are izzy and thomas... poor amanda. i feel sorry for her. well time to get reading on the sequel! YEAH. LOVE IT! chiao for now