Reviews for Acidic Tears |
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erase.me.away chapter 1 . 1/16/2011 Wow, that is one really deep poem. I love how you used your words. It's very emotional if you ask me. Overall i give it a 8.5/10. I like how you created imagery in or minds, almost as if we could feel the pain this person is feeling, and what they are going through. Excellenty written :) Continue to do your best! p.s, this is how i actually review strangers stories, i decided i wanted you to see this other "me" and how i review xD :) Professionally done :) CONTINUE TO WRITE. :) |
Aera the Ninja chapter 1 . 1/16/2011 Hey there, Jenny here :D I like this, it's so sad! You're so good at writing this stuff :) I can't believe you deleted the other one D: ~rosesecret02 |
Domina chapter 1 . 1/15/2011 great usage of line breaks, it gives it an amazing pace. Keep it up :) |
HK Shmetty chapter 1 . 1/15/2011 Wow, congrats on your first story. It's really good. Keep writing and welcome to FictionPress! |