|Reviews for Reunion|
| Kayla2175 chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
Wow! Did not see that coming. This was a very interesting read. I thought that when the cave hit a dead end she would turn back but I was wrong. You did a great job of describing the thoughts and feelings of your main character.
| MoonxCandycane chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
That was really should make more chapters of this,It seems interesting.
| C. Tattiana H-H chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
Snow and ice and a hard to get to location at the foot of the sea cliff made it hard to see.
-Personal: I would change the second "hard" to difficult just to remove the repetition. :)
I enjoyed the slight lead-up before revealing it was a dead end. I thought that was a great use of suspense and also helped pick up the pace a bit. The pacing was great beforehand, but it became even better during that moment.
She step closer and peered at the frozen wall of water...
-Edit: I believe you want "step" to be "stepped".
Omg, continue this, please! This was so engaging! Your descriptions were wonderful, the pacing was perfect, and I'm desperate to know more about these two! Apologies for taking so long to review this, but I'm so glad I did, and you had better be writing a second chapter soon!
| Ayaia chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
:) Intriguing! It has a definite hook, and you automatically want to know the rest of the story.
Definitely one to look out for...Sequels? Further chapters?