Reviews for White edge
slave to the voices chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
I noticed a couple minor technical problems, but the overall feel of the story was very strong. Nice work, keep it up.
scarletrosethorn chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
thsi is so powerful! i can just imagine standing on the edge of a building wanting to step closer and closer till nothing!
Snowflakes Are Drifting chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
So that's that. Never again would that character feel living. The choice of no more choices. Hah. Good view. I like it. Can you review one of my story too? it's call the "Survival of the Fittest" thanks.