Reviews for Everyone's a Critic
Lord Darling chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
You're fighting an inevitability. People WILL like or dislike things, & they have every right to express it, either way. Freedom of speech is a beautiful thing. This isn't an essay. I can't really offer any constructive criticism, because there isn't any structure or definitive style to comment on. Not a flame, but...I'm struggling a little to see the point.
J2F1re chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Yeah, I know this essay is a rant, but please be less casual when you're writing.

"As many Americans are aware, this country has a serious health crisis. People are going bankrupt left and right because of their medical bills. Sick people are getting turned down because they have no insurance. Those who pay all this money for insurance aren't receiving their specific treatment, and don't figure that out until it's too late." Everyone's a Critic, Chapter 1, by J Author: This message, although important, has been restated multiple times. Just so you know.

Overall, good job.

-J2F1re