Reviews for And a Happy New Year |
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![]() ![]() ![]() haha wow I'm bad at sports too :D but does Eli really like Anna ? : |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, to cute :) anyway, I thought at first the one Anna would later on the story would be Jackson, guess I was wrong. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi. It is so beautiful story and I love it. :) This story is so romantic and funny story I ever read it and I love it. :D I am wonder how old are Jackson, Rob, Jasmine, Hallie, Preston, Sadie, Anna and Miles? *curiously* I am glad that Anna met Preston and want to be into his group for PE. Yay. :D I am glad that Anna and Sadie get along so well then become wonderful best friends. Yay. :D I am glad that Miles and Preston treat Anna with respect plus have good conservation with her. :) I don't understand why Jackson act so jerk toward Anna since he met her. Poor Anna. :( I am wonder how long does Sadie have crush on Preston? *curiously* I am glad that Anna never do drugs and alchol. It remind of me when I was in high school where I met my ex boyfriend who have similiar personality to Eli except that my ex boyfriend do few drugs and alchol thats time. :) I am wonder why Jasmine threatned that Eli is bad for Anna? *curiously* I am glad that Anna agree to go to Sadie's new year party and got the kiss from Eli there. Yay. :D I am so glad that Anna's wish come true. Yay. :D I am wonder if there are more one shots of Sadie and Preston, Anna and Eli, Jackson, Hallie, Rob and Jasmine and Miles in the future? *curiously* I am wonder what type of truck does Miles drove? *curiously* I am wonder what kind of car does Sadie drove? *curiously* I am hope that Eli and Anna will be together forever. *hopeful smile* It is amazing story and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Keep writing always and don't stop writing. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() so...? Is he (Eli) the bad guy after all ? He kisses someone else first.. then kisses her and all he says is 'happy new year?' .. aah that killed the romantic mood ! I really luved ur one shot. nice story and nice build up.. But ending .. gr I just want to know if he's a player or he really wanted to kiss her ? he didn't sound he wanted to kiss her |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked how you took the time to build up the characters and didn't make it all about the couple even though this is a one-shot. Still enjoying your writing a lot ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So this one-shot is kind of epic. It's the most refreshing, original, well put together and brillaintly written, realistic and believably story I've read on this site in a while. Your really have some talent! Your characterisation was flawless, and I was so in the momment with all your characters its was astounding. The length was perfect for the story; that said though I so want to read more about these characters - there was just this life and energy to them that was, refreshing. The only thing I seemed a bit confused off, was Eli's reaction? I dunno, in my head I kind of thought maybe he was pulled by the chick he kissed at midnight but he wanted to kiss her, and was going to make it up to her or something. But then he sort of was oblivous to the whole thing? He was drunk, so that kind of explains it. Meh, just the hopeless romantic in me. Loved this piece, so going to read some more of your stuff now. Thanks heaps for posting it on SKOW, otherwise I never would have found it. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So cute ) I love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done. I normally lose interest about halfway through oneshots, but this one was well written and just... well, good. I kept reading because I knew it was going to be a romance and was furiously trying to figure out who she was going to start liking. I didn't expect Eli. But... being the hopeless romantic that I am... and the fact that if an ending ends even REMOTELY less than COMPLETELY AND UTTERLY FANTASTIC I make a sad face. Eli seemed disinterested in the kiss, a little. I dunno, though, considering the tone of the story I think that's what you were going for. I guess it fit a little better than an explosively romantic ending. My hopeless romantic side is still mad at him, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maybe I am a bit bitter at the moment, but it kinda seemed like eli didn't even think of kissing her in the first place.. It kinda seemed like he was pushed into the role. But maybe he was blind about it, his feelings towards her I mean? It is nice that she got a midnight kiss, and it did take me a while to figure out who she would end up kissing. It took me a bit to piece together who Fish liked too. I like how you included her bffs too, cus for a minute I thought that they weren't going to make an appearance. Love the story! ~*~Ngoc1231~*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohmygosh, I LOVE your oneshots. I mean, I just adore them to pieces. haha I always get excited when I see you've updated or have something new. For a while I thought the jock was gonna be Jackson and I was like "No. T_T He's not cool enough for her." But then I realized it was Preston and the world was right again. It was cool how she didn't exactly get what she wanted. (the kiss at midnight exactly) but still got it in the end. :D Anyways, I need to go get ready and eat and stuff. Geez, you're gonna make me late to DnD! lol ~Ember |